Comments of chapter undefined of I Am Energy In Dc

I kind of wish the MC was the main focus of the story more often

Doesn't really matters what you do (To me) as long as you add the plain Martian Physiology. TBH I never really understood the need for the sharingan in the first place. From my perspective, he's an energy being (Who was given the knowledge rather than experiencing it like us), so he's not a fanboy. Rather than having fancy eyes, why not gain their powers? That sounds logical to me.

Can we have more focus on mc and story progress as a whole? Since last chapter basically nothing noteworthy happened, that sucks. You put too much focus on fillers. Sometimes it's fun to see different perspective about major events, but the story about no name Tom and his kids before car crash is not interesting at all, i just skipped half of it. And because I'm too eager to read mc pov reading Kara's pov is frustraiting.

The MC is the one who take supergirl or is other person?

Who is mc?? Amari or Tom?

Thanks for chapter

Thanks for the chapter and I got more invested in toms life and children than amari himself. tom ,a side charater that had less than a single chapter, got me more invested than the main charater of the novel but anyways. R. E. S. T.

Thanks for the chapter

interesting new chapters , I can hardly wait for the next chapter 👍👍

Thanks for the chapter.

Ngl, I've been loving this story, but the more and more the MC becomes the third wheel in the story, I lose interest. I completely understand fleshing out other characters. That's fine, but it's not done in a way that pushes the story forward, or it drags the story beats along at a snails pace while a few chapters don't have the MC and the interactions in them chapters seeks nonexistent and don't add much to said story that we don't already know from third person views of other characters in past chapters. I also know you wanna give another perspective of the aftermath flash and zoom caused with Tom, but the more pages I saw dedicated to him, the more I skipped this chapter.

Thank you

👍👍👍

I have a suggestion for powers why not use the command block from Minecraft in Alan Becker's story, make it so he can create things like apples or couches whenever he wants without wasting energy (Or any other power that lets him create anything he wants without using any of his energy)

Nice!

thanks for the chapter

Ok chapter but my guess that this flash is from different earth either from the injustice universe or the cw universe?