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Comments of chapter undefined of in the mcu with a machine to cross the multiverse.

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in the mcu with a machine to cross the multiverse.

Kyroru

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Ecchi_cloud
Ecchi_cloudLv4Ecchi_cloud

I'm looking forward to bulma and blonde launch being in his harem. just try to take the relationships at a reasonable pace and make it both believable and interesting. if you do that you can make your story even better . good job not rushing into a serious relationship with Ahsoka right away.

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WanZ
WanZLv14WanZ

i definitely enjoyed the novel,and hey it's your novel so just take the criticism that you think helps and ignore the haters, you're doing a great job so far. you already have force and ki,so i think the next world or one of the world you visit should be magical ones like harry potter because the magic is versatile. Or ASOIAF/GOT for dragons,i can already imagine dragon fighting leviathan's would be a great scene right?Anyway,think about it,thx.

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Shikdi_1
Shikdi_1Lv4Shikdi_1

I like that you actually used 2 brain cells(I have never once did that) to realise the dragon balls could easily solve Launch’s problem.

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Tuyomi
TuyomiLv3Tuyomi

Nice chapter bro 👀👀👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

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Kyroru
KyroruAuthorKyroru

Sure I’ll put pics in an author’s note on all the people so far in the next chapter.

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transcribed_master
transcribed_masterLv4transcribed_master

another great chapter thanks author

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