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freeza took "5 minute" to blow up a planet... quickly is relative to the situation. roshi blew up a moon roughly 200,000 mile away in under a minute that is pretty quick in my book
Sometimes the word "love" is not sweet talking but a title used for the person.I call my daughter "(insert name) love" or "baby girl" unless she is in trouble (then it turns into her first and middle name.)
one less 0 please. master roshi destroyed the moon once when Goku went oozaru form during a tournament as a kid. I believe roshi only had a PL of around 120ish at that time
same mom different dad maybe
Just FYI for the future. When making a sentence we do not use more and -er in the same sentence. When looking to use more and most or -er and -est we look at how many syllables the word has. A single-syllable word like strong would use the er and est endings. Here are examples of using er and est " He was stronger than Thomas." "That was the weirdest dance I have ever seen." Here are examples of using more and most. "He carried more groceries to the house." "She was the most beautiful lady I have ever seen." I hope this helps you with future writing.
mine was Prisoner... it was a family name
i figured it was something like that.You are doing great by the way, keep up the good work.
Just an fyi Americans use feet instead of meters if he is an American.
decent chapter, i have one thing to say. trauma for a character can be a decent motivator but use it sparingly. too much trauma and it will destroy a good character or just make them an edge lord. trauma is not needed for a character development and too many authors use it as a crutch, when no trauma can work just fine. people don't need horrible experiences to become something amazing. all excessive trauma will do is give them mental issues and PTSD.
one of these days he will be allowed to tell his joke
na that's how it is anywhere. take for example somebody picks on a kid until big brother comes around. we are taught how to pick and choose our battles. if he messes with Luffy, even if he wins somebody will find him. so he loses either way. thus the do not provoke, can't afford to provoke.