Comments of chapter undefined of [MHA: The Ice King]

You Like frog? What?

Yeah! Ice King! Wwooooooo!

Punctuation and grammar needs some work, but overall a good start.

Not bad a bit different but I like difference

Nice first chapter, At least it’s not truck-kun, what’s the update schedule?

Short af chapter that lacks serious details

To all authors who may or may not read this, to clarify this is nothing more than my opinion, but I see it all the time. QUIT. Stop making the reincarnation scene, whether the deaths or the meeting god or rob just stop. If you can’t make it interesting or original, then don’t do it everyone has read it before at least ten thousand times, 90% of readers probably skip it, I know I do. No one wants to read the same thing a thousand times. 2. For those who right the death scene or the rob meeting and it takes it takes more than 1 chapter, if you read the above then you can probably guess my feelings about having to read the same thing only spread out further. So I will just ask to please stop. I’m sure there is atleast a few people who agree with me.

Is… is every paragraph gonna end in “-“