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Comments of chapter undefined of HP : The New Addition

Vlas_Orel
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I'm writing from Google Translator. My suggestion is the classic - Daphne Greengrass. What I want to say from what I read is, NOT MUCH! Try to write more words per chapter and some kind of approximate schedule. Otherwise, I don’t know whether to add your reading material to the library, otherwise you never know, you’ll write 3 chapters and that’s it.

Divine_Isu
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One of the delacour or greengrass girls, they are my favourite characters based on what I have read from quite a few fanfictions.

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Thoughts_of_a_soul

Thoughts_of_a_soul
MUSSIC_L0VER
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harem suggestions: Luna Lovegood, Susan Bones, Fleur Delacour, Gabriel Delacour, Daphne Greengrass, and Astoria Greengrass

JohnnyK
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Hermione In Harem

DaoistTP0fHy
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i hope it's his sister lona or his mother its more exiting this way

TruthHurtsX1000
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Hope chapters will be longer. This really felt short

BLITZ2
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Great Chapter!!!!!