MUSSIC_L0VER
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I love basically every novel/fanfic all that it has to be in the novel/fanfic is atleast readable without giving me a headache and semi good plot
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MUSSIC_L0VER4dCommentedFor this one, I actually want to ask the readers' opinion. Should I include him?- MUSSIC_L0VER5dReplied to MUSSIC_L0VER
good story so far!
{Hi, I'm the author. You may not know who I am, but I'm a Spanish speaker, not very well-versed in English. The reason for my appearance is to clarify that, first of all, I translate with AI and some words may be lost in translation. If English speakers could clarify the errors, it would be very helpful. A kiss on the cheek, and see you around.} - MUSSIC_L0VER5dCommented
Your writing is good so far. I will point out the obvious errors when I see them.
{Hi, I'm the author. You may not know who I am, but I'm a Spanish speaker, not very well-versed in English. The reason for my appearance is to clarify that, first of all, I translate with AI and some words may be lost in translation. If English speakers could clarify the errors, it would be very helpful. A kiss on the cheek, and see you around.} - MUSSIC_L0VER5dCommentedThis paragraph has been deleted.
- MUSSIC_L0VER7dCommented
I will just imagine this until there is an official image
John's body flew back, and he came to the side of the giant rat's corpse in an instant. Using the force to roll over, he suddenly grasped the emerald green magic flute in his hand. - MUSSIC_L0VER9dCommentedA [Winchester M1887 shotgun] with a red oak stock and gold carvings depicting exorcisms on the gun came into view.
- MUSSIC_L0VER9dCommentedCh 1 Chapter 1: Death and Awakening.
- MUSSIC_L0VER9dCommented"I speak all languages." Nick answered honestly. "A very practical ability strange one." the figure said while Nick heard the sound of clothes getting put on. "Nicholas or Nick if you prefer." Nick said and the figure looked confused. "What do you mean?" she asked calmly. "My name , Nicholas or Nick for short." He explained and the woman seemed to understand. "I see , I require lodging and access to records from when I sealed myself Strange Nick." she said calmly making Nicks face twitch a little.
- MUSSIC_L0VER9dCommented
read it anyway
Und das heißt - MUSSIC_L0VER11dCommentedCh 1 gen mother
- MUSSIC_L0VER11dCommentedEven if the Ministry of Magic found him in the complicated London sewers, or if the Transfiguration on him wore off and he returned to his original form, he would only think of himself as a true toad.
- MUSSIC_L0VER13dCommented"Oh, I suddenly remembered that the final seems to be in the middle of the night. I heard that the deputy director is very afraid of the dark now, and he has to be accompanied when walking at night. Can you really watch the game when you are like that?"
- MUSSIC_L0VER15dReplied to Isekailogy
I remembered the magic, so I looked up the episode number
[Magic—Spell text: draw the rules and range with a wand, and those who step into the trap will have to abide by the rules. It is a kind of enchantment, and imposes an absolute rule on those who step into the enchantment.] - MUSSIC_L0VER18dCommentedThey felt like they didn't sleep for weeks and survived without coffee. Their mind was throbbing in pain.
- MUSSIC_L0VER20dCommentedAs if the walls of Jericho had fallen, Igor stormed the pot with both hands. His hand speed proved his bachelor status as he shoved drumstick and thigh into his mouth. His powerful jaws crushed the bones to pieces.
- MUSSIC_L0VER20dReplied to Xinum_Sensational
well, if we are speaking of God, he has no gender. We just choose to depict God as male or female to humanize him so we can better understand the concept of god. In reality, god is beyond what we humans can comprehend
{Then there was God} - MUSSIC_L0VER20dReplied to Radian
same🤣
Finally reaching the rocky structure Harry carefully checked the surroundings before trying to sneak in and grab his hostage in the form of Ron who looked quite calm given that he was being guarded by a mirage viper nest. Mirage vipers were considered xxx graded dangerous creatures by themselves but the trick was that they VERY rarely were by themselves. They were a rainbow scaled type of serpent that had illusion based magical abilities which was where they got their name from and usually lived in a nest of a breeding pair and three offspring. They were also highly venomous and not the biggest fan of intruders in their nests.- - MUSSIC_L0VER22dCommentedOh what do you thing about it, how strong is MC now. One look was enough to paralyse Nick. Hehehe
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why is it that the moment I read this, I thought sexy Russian dragoness
{Unnamed Mountainside, Russia} - MUSSIC_L0VER22dCommentedMatteo had told them that they'd be disappointed, but they didn't listen. Well, they did listen, for they would never ignore their deity, but they thought he was saying just that because, well, he was Matteo. Stronger, faster, smarter, better than everyone and everything. It was only natural for him to find Magical Britain disappointing.