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Comments of chapter undefined of [Being rewritten]

DaoistdPeYrT
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author what are his unarmed prowess in terms of fiction at the moment and will he become a weapon master too instead of just the sword

venomwave
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I hope he shows yoruichi his full power before she leaves for seireitei, like tobirama flexing on Sasuke and his goons

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DaoistdPeYrT
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author you could also have him fight whis and gain ultra instinct the pinnacle of martial prowess

BLITZ2
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Author shouldn’t his Shikai and Bankai evolved throughout the millennia!!!!!

Proto_Arata
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What happened to the dialogues in this chapter? You wrote it like a script.

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Anonny_Anonymous
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If he can imagine these anime characters, can he summon them as constructs to battle people? It would be funny to send characters like Majiin Buu to rage against them.

creekinny
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Yoruichi ficará tão chocada quando ele flexionar seu poder, ele nem precisa de Shikai muito menos Bankai pra lutar, e olha que ainda existe Kido, mas não tenho dúvidas de que ele pode derrotar quase toda Gotei 13 só com Zanjutsu Sinceramente nessa geração fraca de Shinigami os únicos que podem ter uma idéia de sua força fora os mais velhos são Urahara e Aizen e isso só por que eles são muito inteligentes e pesquisam muito, com certeza deve estar gravado na história da SS como Toji foi um dos grandes gênios no começo da academia o cara entrou e basicamente dominou tudo, não é por que tem séculos que ele não faz um movimento que isso o torna incompetente

degermon
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Thanks

OtakuSad0
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TFTC

Ariel_Seary
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I wonder if yoruichi will give blatantly wrong info to ichigo and friends when they try to rescue rukia about our mc maybe saying he’s the weakest and most unprofessional captain until reality slaps them over the head with him being the GOAT

fedi_mdaini
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come on man, half of the chapters are him talking about his trainning. get the story going we're bored here

Monsterb620
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So he had the power to summon people from other universes, will he get to the point where he can manifest them in real life and can go to there universe. Basically what I’m asking is if this fic will turn into a multiverse fanfic.

SaikoYonebayashi
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Noice thanks for the update ~