I really love the fanfic . even if it's slow, at least you made it enjoyable. Keep up the good work. also, do you have a discord link and somewhere I can simp on the book for the amazing quality you put in (hopefully you don't ditch us)
Good authors are a rare species. how about somewhere to support the fanfic to keep you even more motivated
RikuKage:Thank you for the wonderful comments. I really appreciate it. unfortunately, no, I do not have a Discord. I also don't know how to make one, I could always look it up, but for now, I promise myself that if I reach 1 million views, I would make one.
Thanks for the chapters absolutely Loved it so far Just Hope He is gonna have a very romantic Our very interesting time with Rose and maybe later with Haruhime considering His MofuMofu Instincts... Atleast Rose is Always a pairing i Like to See especially because of how rare it actually is not as rare as a Misha pairing but o Well...
Atleast things are moving forward where pretty much everything that happened here actually felt important and meaningful. Though i would say him giving Rose a nickname was kinda cringe and just weird. I would also say that Syr's/Freya's inner monologue of Odr just felt forced. I know that she is searching for her Odr, but it just felt forced that she was instantly thinking of her Odr at this moment instead of just thinking that he had a boring soul. At that moment, she wouldn't have even thought of Odr and just wrote the MC as boring. She has already been looking at the color of people's souls that i do feel that she has more control of her obsession. The MC's personality is still hard to enjoy at times, making me feel like i am reading an arrogant idiot. Yeah sure its a character but its not a character that is enjoyable to read especially as the MC. I agree that you should concentrate more on writing more Third Person. POV's are good when you want to show more of the character's personality, way of thinking and action. A Third Person Point of View would have been much better with the latter scene with his unintentional encounter with Syr/Freya as it would have avoided all my problems with her forced inner monologue.