Devils_hand
yeah i know..this is just an input for u ok..no offence..i respect ur story,,truly..but u see..this is about Naruto..not some kingdom building..while u want to make it dark..it no longer funny..u make Hinata full deceit and manipulation that no longer look like she love Naruto..she just want to use him..not mention the other.. u make her quiet OP..and yet she hide behind others..now the story bcome just about a psycopath Hinata..bordering megalomania..thats why i said no longer fun.. remember the basic..this is Naruto..
Devils_hand:really 🥺, but i had mentioned that this will be dark in the tags and synopsis.