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Comments of chapter undefined of Batman x Arc Reactor

Len_Stoff
Len_StoffLv1Len_Stoff

God this is such garbage, I hate reading this, you ruined the fanfic at the very beginning, huge nerf mc, and this chapter in a 10 year coma is just ridiculous, haven't you come up with anything smarter than this? It's like I'm reading mtl and it's very very bad, complete disappointment

King_Raerae0
King_Raerae0Lv13King_Raerae0

the nerf is ten years wasted for nothing he could have started training his body at a young age which the original Batman didn't and never really reached his peak physically

Xcalibur_Xc:What huge nerf? And just because of the ending it looks like mtl? What kind of flimsy excuse is that lol. And I guess you have no idea what Flashpoint Paradox is. Hahahaha. You are that troll, aren't you? You troll others' work. I know you. LOL. Try your best because this is the first and last reply you will get from me.
wap100
wap100Lv4wap100

Really, a coma?

THE_RED_FURY
THE_RED_FURYLv1THE_RED_FURY

You ruined it, a proper time skip was recommended and not the coma, it already lost a lot of advantage

Noys
NoysLv4Noys

yikes the author did a "how to ruin your fanfic in one chapter"

Michael_Scotts
Michael_ScottsLv4Michael_Scotts

Yeah the coma is quite annoying. Missing out on time he could've spent accomplishing anything really. His body should be wrecked. Just an excuse to jump straight to 18 years old. Feels like those annoying Naruto ones that starts at graduation and makes it age 16. With the same joke tests nerfing them horribly so they can jump to lemons.

Evilswordmank423
Evilswordmank423Lv4Evilswordmank423

thanks for the chapter but i quit

Gratiz_
Gratiz_Lv2Gratiz_

Okay, I will read the next chapter, but I'm close to quitting. Coma, really? Just wow

guilherme99gc
guilherme99gcLv14guilherme99gc

Wait, all that school and study drama saying he didn't have time for that and you put him in a coma to skip time, what's he going to do now? Since you decided to write chapters just about this, as far as I know, going into a coma doesn't give you school training or a diploma, he'll simply ignore studying now, even if his parents forced him to go, or he'll study primary education at the age of eighteen, or he'll buy the diplomas what he could have done without this coma. I'm going to keep reading since the plot wasn't introduced in these initial seven chapters, it only served to have his parents alive and a technically weaker Bruce since in the original he left to train early instead of coming in and is in a coma. You could have started with him as an adult in a parallel universe where his parents are alive and there wouldn't have been any difference and there would have been less anger from some readers🤔.

Bakimaru
BakimaruLv2Bakimaru

That was a bit lame.

DaoistCaio
DaoistCaioLv1DaoistCaio

10 years in a coma, the MC won't even know how to walk, I had a friend who spent 1 year in a coma and when he woke up he had already forgotten how to walk and had several injuries on his back

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Gregory_Sullivan
Gregory_SullivanLv15Gregory_Sullivan

it's your story author so please write it how you want to and ignore any comments you dont like. personally I'm not a fan of this choice and not a fan of the whole 2 split world thing but your writing a good story and I hope to see where it leads

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Arnab_Panday
Arnab_PandayLv2Arnab_Panday

You did good author. Now I don't have to watch his childhood where he makes many of his childhood friends ( girls). Hahahaha

Reiya9
Reiya9Lv4Reiya9

What garbage writing introducing a coma. Waste of time

rbp
rbpLv2rbp

this comment section sure is funny ,🤣🤣🤣,,,, the author complain about the readers complaining and reaching their own conclusion about how the plot was done. well mostly readers reach their own conclusion reading the existing chapters though some directly right it in the comment section as others well wait a bit more why that happen.

killerdaa
killerdaaLv13killerdaa

lol waste ten years for absolutely nothing.

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Primas
PrimasLv4Primas

system will only make you weak it's I think that can be controlled by some other entity 2 to control you, I mean MC

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Reiken_Ancalagon_1451
Reiken_Ancalagon_1451Lv4Reiken_Ancalagon_1451

So basically this was a butterfly effect due to Bruce trying to prevent his parents death. Something like this happens when someone tries to change certain events in the timeline. You know like (The Will Of The World ).🤔

Uncultured_PIG
Uncultured_PIGLv4Uncultured_PIG

a rising ⭐ has fallen inside the 🗑️

RogueCrescent
RogueCrescentLv14RogueCrescent

Thanks for the chapter NOT!

Anide_Oficial
Anide_OficialLv12Anide_Oficial

Volví, porque realmente no tengo nada más que leer y no tengo inspiración para escribir mi fanfic. Entendí la lógica del evento canónico o la alteración de la línea del tiempo. Pero olvidas una cosa. El protagonista no estaba alterando la línea del tiempo. Porque esa es su línea del tiempo. Él no viene del futuro, su alma viene de otro multiverso. Dos para ser exactos. Y hasta donde tengo entendido, los eventos canónicos afectan en DC solamente si vienes de un futuro donde cierto personaje influye directamente o indirectamente en tu existencia y tu posibilidad de viajar en el tiempo. No es como pasa en Marvel y cosas que están escritas en piedra con Spider-Man y la red del destino. Igualmente siendo el multiverso de DC un multiverso infinito, se podría decir que ahí sí existe un destino escrito en piedra y cambiarlo tiene un precio.