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Daoist8RWJ0A
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Thanks

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Jonathan4star
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so he gonna kill piccolo next chapter cause if he doesn’t die there’s no reason to go to namek

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LtKaiser
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Story is great but the only thing I dislike is the lack of integration of the MC into the world. Like Bulma said before, MC is like a puppeteer playing with everyone's fates.. If he truly cared about Canon he would not minimize his footprint in the world but he actively participates and makes immoral choices just to maintain Canon. There is no aftermatch discussion talking about the MC's moral dilemma about these choices as though he doesn't consider them real people. The so called masterplan was great at first but now becoming a turnoff.This is my two cents.

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Idkyk
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happy New year

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constantine17
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happy new year, more chaps plz

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MagicSand
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Thanks for the chapterWish you well authorKeep up the good work

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JonRedSea
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Happy New Year Thanks for the Chapter

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QuantumSt1ck
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thanks for the chapter, cant believe yiu havent posted since last year, huehuehue

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Leon_Luis_
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Great Fight. A plus

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EANID
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thanks for the chapter 🔥🔥it's getting intense

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DaoistCaio
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Tftc

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Ryosuke_saeba
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thanks for the chapter

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Yuki_55
Yuki_55Lv13Yuki_55

everything is going just as planned!

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Hellside
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Tnks for chap happy New Year

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THANORR
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will ajax go to namek

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LeonTheDarkFlame
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thanks for the chapter 🔥🔥🔥 this is one of the most interesting story that I have ever read keep cooking up this heat also please survive humans but I'm sorry piccolo but you got to go gotta preserve the cannon also can't wait for the next chapter

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The_Book
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Happy new year

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OnlyGoodStuff_1
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thanks for the chapter