Equuleus_Nox
Story is great but the only thing I dislike is the lack of integration of the MC into the world. Like Bulma said before, MC is like a puppeteer playing with everyone's fates.. If he truly cared about Canon he would not minimize his footprint in the world but he actively participates and makes immoral choices just to maintain Canon. There is no aftermatch discussion talking about the MC's moral dilemma about these choices as though he doesn't consider them real people. The so called masterplan was great at first but now becoming a turnoff.This is my two cents.