Comments of chapter undefined of Dragon Ball Alternative

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Muy buenos very good Espero que en el próximo capitulo ya salga ajax

Nappa was supposed to be like this in normal Dragon Ball, He was once an advisor to the king, The minion you expect is a lucid head

I think author forgot that mc exists....

Its just like the fight against frieza all over again

Once again

thanks for the chapter

Nice chapter

Amazing chapter love nappa’s character more and more

Can't say I find the fights well done at all. Too much nonsense, like the crushed arm thing here. That's not how physics works lol. You have to stay in the realm of believability. The most egregious errors are the p.o.v interruptions. For instance the whole flashback part that was meant to show that tien had no chance to fire ( don't believe it) That was a painfully written paragraph full of contradictions. For as well as the story is written, I honestly can't say I enjoy it.

Thanks for the Chapter

thanks

thanks for the chapter