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Comments of chapter undefined of Dragon Ball Alternative

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DaoistyQNGiX
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Yup 1/5 is the finalized rating lol just nerfed the MC to the ground and it’s pointless to continue reading this dumpster fire

Equuleus_Nox
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You haven’t even gotten to the fighting chapters yet! :(

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KamiNoDice
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not gonna lie i dislikw abridged popo being in the fqnfic. it waa funny watching the abridged but it feel out of place in this fanfic. however i respect the author choice since it is his fanfic ofc. looking forward to futur chapters

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Chaddts
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The lesson was suppose to be unique to him, but even without the wish he would be in the same situation. So would anyone unable to break the ki around them. In all honesty I don't think the supposed lesson teaches anything unless you are a buffoon. We all know the old answer to killing an immortal is setting them in concrete, or dropping them to the bottom of the ocean. Which is essentially the same thing as shown here.

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Anonny_Anonymous
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The nerfing, the extreme changes to this universe, the AU aspect of things…. It’s like you’re purposely trying to sabotage your own fic.

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MagicSand
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Thanks for the chapterWish you well authorKeep up the good work

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DuchessKolslaw
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He could still train under higher gravity yhough? Why start at 10? Start at 1.5 or 2.

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AvidReader962
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Great chapter. I wonder if he could figure out how to Lightning bend?

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OnlyGoodStuff_1
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thanks for the chapter

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Shogeyo
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Nice chapter, especially the end

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Idkyk
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The chapter was amazing

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Frances1
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thanks

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Ninjago12
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Berry interesting

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Ninjago12
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Berry interesting

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UnsimpleMexicano
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Tftc

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zeraf
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thanks for the chapter

Equuleus_Nox
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Hmm, perhaps you’re seeing something that I’m not? What Ajax was trying to go after, which wasn’t really stated here, was precisely 10x gravity, not really the time aspect, which is what you stated. While certain flying maneuvers can create high gravitational forces, Ajax does need to train in high gravity, like physical exercises, Ki exercises, etc. He can’t really do all that if he was trying to maintain the g force the entire time! My apologies if Ajax seemed a little dumb-dumb here! It wasn’t my intention to do so or to force any character flaw. It’s probably on me because I think the Time Chamber makes the most sense at this point. Ajax is aware that him training now isn’t the most effective so he wasn’t going to stay the entire year. But that’s just splitting hairs on my part.