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I must say, the quality and pacing of the chapters have increased drastically. I am simply loving this. I really want this fic to go slow and not just simply time-skip to Kaito becoming 10 years old or something. Please let Kaito and Itachi graduate together and be on the same Genin team. I really want to see them going on missions together, and I want to see their bond grow stronger after going through life-and-death situations together on a mission gone wrong. I really want to see the journey of Itachi and Kaito from Genin to Chunin to Anbu (or Jonin, depending on your story). always competing against each other and always pushing each other to grow stronger. Please don't make this the story of Naruto and Sasuke; instead, let it be the story of Kaito and Itachi.
Amazing story so far can't wait for more. Also do you plan on him learning kenjusu as well also I think you missed a good chance of throwing donzo under the bus when his mom was taking zetsu was alone with him be4 his dad shoes up so his mom missed that Interaction so in the hospital When the 3rd hokage was about to walk out of the room you could said that the clone Said something like danzo didn't say anything about a brat being here. That would had made the 3rd more watch full with him he is putting blame on uchia
i Will act like Kurama incidente never hapened because that chapter was trash AFF and Just keep going from this chapter like nothing hapened (a little late to coment that but If i comented in the proper chapter insted of keep scrowling i would have droped since i realy hate that chapter and some of the next chapters )