Comments of chapter undefined of Fate/DC Universe

This chapter felt weird to read.

A piece of advice, reread the chapter, the dialogues seem a bit forced, people (especially in a position of power) are reluctant to believe that they don't have control of the situation, the dialogue (in my opinion) lacks a bit of contrast between the parties and raiden should express himself in a more confident and decisive way, he has the will of gaia on his side and that of all the heroes and some have an enormous arrogance and a political experience that would make anyone pale, in conclusion, we should also take into account the heroes with whom interacted and advised him throughout the story to express his character and attitude. This is my opinion, I hope it can be useful to you, otherwise I really like your story, keep it up. translated with google translate

This chapter is terrible and ruins the MCs character. It looks like the author is destroying his own story. I hope they fix it, but either way I’m moving own to other stories.

did you use a ai writing bot i feel like this whole conversation has been repeated in different words like 10 times

Honestly, at this point arresting him is stupid. They just don't have any way to contain him; or catch him for that matter... Chances are the justice league would just; drag their feet on that order- Anyways... Provided he doesn't cross a significant line. If anything... With the knowledge of his feats; and importance of his actions he should have diplomatic immunity at this point. You don't jail someone like that if they turn psycho anyways- You put them down... And let Death deal with him.

Feels like a doormat

bruh, he is starting to feel like a pushover

didn't he originally not care about his public image? why is he caring now all of a sudden?

What a cliche. A boring cliche.

I feel this chapter had a lot of unnecessary dialogue

TFTC

Thanks for the chapter