Comments of chapter undefined of The Crumbling World

Nice written first chapter. Also funny and brutal written. Keep up the work 👍

What a chapter! Mind blowing stuff✨

I'm currently in the middle of rereading Shadow Slave and as soon as I finish, I'll check this out. The novel seems very interesting and I have high hopes that this will be a masterpiece.

the mc had quite an attitude

The initial chapter was excellent, not only for its well-structured narrative but also as an ideal launching point for the novel titled "The Crumbling World."

Very good story so far!

Nah, MC is just trippin on shrooms

it reminds me of some manga... classroom horror.. nice bang right at the beginning.

An excellent start, nicely structured narrative. I only read chapter 1 so far. I am a slow reader, but if you need any assistance, feel free to reach out, you know where to find me. Take care. Best of luck.

Best book ever, changed my life

Nice frst chapter, Looks interesting

nice little novel with dark chapter ending.sometimes a little miss translated but probably because you original used german "eigenwörter" and german phrase's like "das ist nicht das gelbe vom Ei"

1st chapter was super bro, now only start this reading after I read this chapter definitely, I will finish every chapter in your novel it was super 👍best work

interesting chapter, but doesn't it seem like some typical berserk type story? but in all aspects, I like this