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Comments of chapter undefined of The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)

UnknownWriter4Fun
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Its a good explanation, but your other characters leave much to be desired. Why is he telling this to these two random guys? And they aren’t even intelligent or seem to be companion material. You lack some depth in this story.

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Cristian99
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Hahahaha he is going to regret this i really want to see how those two are going to change the future

NecronFlayedOnes
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oh no

jess_weston
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good luck Adam, you are going to need it😆

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theanimemail
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dang, I'm all caught up. Well, now I got to go update my review a bit.

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Xedornox
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TheManCandy
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For compensation post another one hahaha

CouchPotatoDandy
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Sigh, this and the previous chapter were completely out of pace and without any value in it..

Luis52
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Irishdamned
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I thank you for the chapter.

Insane_Fantasy
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tftc~~~○●

EvilPenguin_666
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BasuSh_
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Thanks for the chapter

Harley_DB
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Thanks for the chapter [img=update]

SpeedyG
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I think he just started a new cult or worst, religion. Will bite him back I bet...

Leo_Santos
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Thanks for the chapter

Shaw_5532
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Looking good can’t wait to get to the twilight series modern times section

DaoistYtBM0i
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PainxSama
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Happy_days
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thanks for the chapter