Comments of chapter undefined of The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)

Adam the witch hunter will be a legend centuries later.

thanks for the chapter. it was a good one but just saying the interactions between Henry, John and Adam appeared to be unnecessary. You are doing good work. I was just trying to help, if there is some depth behind that for plot development then ignore this comment. Have a Good day!

prepare rhe consequences using the adam card lol

Honesty, these last 5 or so chapter have been pretty awesome; it feels like the story has finally found its flow and generally read WAY better than prior to ch 50.

thanks for the chapter

Why not just kill em and be done with it too 🤷🏻‍♂️

Thanks

I think I would rather see him find a few new escorts. These dimwits may make a journey more interesting but I think they are more likely to be annoying pests. Either way, not a fan…

I thank you for the chapter.

tftc~~~○●

MOREEEE PLEASE, WHEN DO YOU GONNA UPDATE THE CHAPTERS?

please do a chapter with Baldwin IV the leper king it would be so cool

Thanks for the chapter

Hmmmm.... I wonder how it'll pan out.

A new chapter

Thanks for chapter

This was a weird chapter, it didn’t feel real and not in a good way. Maybe it’s the stupid comic relief people that ruin it for me. It doesn’t feel like it matched the flow/mood of the story so far. Plus shouldn’t Adam be a lot more sophisticated/adaptable/Manipulative/well spoken and thoughtful after 4000+ years? He just still some random guy, now with abilities and stuff. I think there is a profound lack of character development.

Thank you for the chapter ☺️