Comments of chapter undefined of The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)

Adam the witch hunter will be a legend centuries later.

thanks for the chapter. it was a good one but just saying the interactions between Henry, John and Adam appeared to be unnecessary. You are doing good work. I was just trying to help, if there is some depth behind that for plot development then ignore this comment. Have a Good day!

prepare rhe consequences using the adam card lol

Honesty, these last 5 or so chapter have been pretty awesome; it feels like the story has finally found its flow and generally read WAY better than prior to ch 50.

thanks for the chapter

Thanks

I think I would rather see him find a few new escorts. These dimwits may make a journey more interesting but I think they are more likely to be annoying pests. Either way, not a fan…

I thank you for the chapter.

why is he even telling them anything... so stupid

tftc~~~○●

MOREEEE PLEASE, WHEN DO YOU GONNA UPDATE THE CHAPTERS?

please do a chapter with Baldwin IV the leper king it would be so cool

Thanks for the chapter

Hmmmm.... I wonder how it'll pan out.

A new chapter

Thanks for chapter

This was a weird chapter, it didn’t feel real and not in a good way. Maybe it’s the stupid comic relief people that ruin it for me. It doesn’t feel like it matched the flow/mood of the story so far. Plus shouldn’t Adam be a lot more sophisticated/adaptable/Manipulative/well spoken and thoughtful after 4000+ years? He just still some random guy, now with abilities and stuff. I think there is a profound lack of character development.

Thank you for the chapter ☺️