Comments of chapter undefined of The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)

Among the existing vampires there is a vampire like Amon who lived in ancient Egypt (it can be assumed that the deity Amon came from him). The MC is a traveler, a trader, a doctor it could be interesting that the legends of the god Hermes come from him. It could be interesting that characters considered legends in the future end up being transformed vampires by him (Arthur, the Cid, Merlin, Jeanne d'Arc, Tomoe Gozen, etc...)

thanks for the chapter. We'd say the MC is starting to create their own faction, or at least the people they train will be grateful to them when they leave and eventually form their own covens with similar ideologies to the MC. Could be interesting if they keep in touch Otherwise, there's something I never understood in Twilight, that's why they don't drink blood bags (especially since Carlisle is a doctor in a hospital...).

Thanks for the chapter!

I will say this: despite constantly suggesting edits the improvements from the first few chaps are pretty clear. Keep up the awesome work.

thanks for the chapter 👍👍

Thanks

Thanks for the chapter.

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Not the sort of companion I was expecting…

i actually really liked this chapter

I thank you for the chapter.

Thanks for chapter

thx for the chap

Thank you for the chapter

Tftc

loving the work can't wait to see what happens next

Ty