Comments of chapter undefined of The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)

Be better then the rockerfellars instead of dominating one Industry dominate all of them

he should collect art pieces and build a mansion somewhere on a mountain and build into the mountain and make a vault. storying things that will become relics and maybe some of his own creations, as well as gold. in the future he can build mansions around the world with similar concepts and display his art once a way to preserve them is invented or invent his own. he should also forge the spear of Leonidas assassins' creed style. imagine scientists hundreds of years from now finding the spear and marveling about how impossibly hard it is.

Ho, ho, ho. Bro became Santa.

Nice chapter! And with so mach time and power on his hands, the mc should start building his empire in the shadows (he doesn't strike me as someone who wants to rule "in the light") so that by canon time, he would have his hands in every "pie" in the world...

I love this!

love it

build bank all over the world and then found a small country in Africa as headquarters and for vampire like a country for vampires.

Dude accidentally became Hades(God of death, underworld and WEALTH), Hephaestus(God of the forge), and Santa.

thanks for the chapter... good day to all who read

thanks for the chap

Thanks for the chapter

tftc! love it.

thanks for the chapter

This chapter almost made me actually chuckle

I thank you for the chapter.