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Comments of chapter undefined of The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)

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The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)

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Sammhy
SammhyLv11Sammhy

Unnecessary and difficult to take seriously. Vampires are very proud and arrogant. And I don't think it would stay that way when he comes to the volturi and says; This immortal human daddy here will help you from the volturi clan against the Romanian clan and then I will go on my way. Here, take the heads of your minions. It would be very hilarious and unrealistic if it stayed that way. Whether he helps or not, the Romanian clan will lose anyway. By doing this, the only consequence is to enter the sight of the vampires and it is an act that I see no need to do.

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Helloooooppp
HellooooopppLv3Helloooooppp

Yes, he is a stupid protagonist, there is no good reason for him to get involved with the volturi.

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nunya_business_3493
nunya_business_3493Lv4nunya_business_3493

No Austin Powers joke " That's no way to get ahead"

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Mr_Shang
Mr_ShangLv13Mr_Shang

The concept of the novel is good, but sadly it's poorly executed, I'm going to leave here bc reading this fic is letting me really frustrated, I wish good luck for the author and all the best, peace ✌️!

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SpeedyG
SpeedyGLv10SpeedyG

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CouchPotatoDandy
CouchPotatoDandyLv5CouchPotatoDandy

It's a bummer the MC isn't a little more powerful and fast

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Blue_Sky_123
Blue_Sky_123Lv6Blue_Sky_123

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Zyes1
Zyes1Lv4Zyes1

Vamps in twilight have special abilities apart from their strength and speed. Does he have any?

8mth
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Crom_Darkstar
Crom_DarkstarLv4Crom_Darkstar

he really needs weapon making knowledge

8mth
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TheUltimateP1e
TheUltimateP1eLv4TheUltimateP1e

now thats how it should go

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Xedornox
XedornoxLv1Xedornox

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Irishdamned
IrishdamnedLv14Irishdamned

I thank you for the chapter.

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Zero93
Zero93Lv6Zero93

Thanks for chapter

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PhantomNite629
PhantomNite629Lv15PhantomNite629

thx for the chap

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Archangel1999
Archangel1999Lv15Archangel1999

why they wipe them out just fine on their own u r just giving them a chance to catch u

8mth
EvilPenguin_666
EvilPenguin_666Lv4EvilPenguin_666

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Randy_Rhodes
Randy_RhodesLv13Randy_Rhodes

don't trust them and always be on guard.

8mth
Green_Monkey
Green_MonkeyLv4Green_Monkey

Thanks for the chapter

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IDLE_Chaos
IDLE_ChaosLv4IDLE_Chaos

😁👍

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Dark_Soulsbestgame
Dark_SoulsbestgameLv4Dark_Soulsbestgame

Nice

8mth
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