Comments of chapter undefined of Kill the Sun

The latest chapters are so much better than the last 100. I think keeping the momentum of your novel is where your losing readers. I’ve read the 2 novels before this and the momentum was always present. Just my 2 cents. Saying that I think the potential in this novel is far greater. Loved reading your last two and I look forward to whatever you have in store for us!

The recent chapter feel much better, I don't know if it's because we're getting 1500 words rather than 2k but they seem to have an even better writting than usual, thank you for your work !

Yeat

Steve seems like the typical 9-5 worker who is just there to work & get paid.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Great cliffhanger

Thanks for the chapter!