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Comments of chapter undefined of The Ashen Keeper (Marvel x Dark Souls x Bloodborne)

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The Ashen Keeper (Marvel x Dark Souls x Bloodborne)

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Dakota_Morrison
Dakota_MorrisonLv4Dakota_Morrison

It started by skipping what I honestly think is a VERY important discovery and the travels afterwards connected to it, which then blitzed into a monumental moment that seemed to be brushed aside by casually saying "I'm here, burned a soul, now I'm gone". This seriously needs to slow down a little and actually flesh out these moments more so they can actually bring life into the story instead of being treated like cliff notes to be ignored after being stated.

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Lightgiver
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Aye but I was pretty new to writing here😅😅

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CLO2610
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thank you for the chapter

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Reyviel_Faesly
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Mommy Keeper, tell us a bed time story

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Abdool010
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DementionMan_626
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I'm loving this, you're a great author and I'm shaking in anticipation for your future endeavors.

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AvidReader962
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Great chapter

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Soviet_Dog
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aaaa

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mamun_220
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Thanks for the chapter

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Isekailogy
IsekailogyLv4Isekailogy

how about the eternal? "in this flame, you shall be reborn"

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Visionario
VisionarioLv3Visionario

10/10 tu historia autor-sama me encanta como estas llevando la historia estoy ansiando ver tus futuros episodios y me encantara leer la reacción de los vengadores al saber la historia de Keeper y el mundo de dark soul de nuevo 10/10 tu historia

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Mario_Santos_7600
Mario_Santos_7600Lv14Mario_Santos_7600

I won't accept eliminating Hydra until or unless there's the elevator scene

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cheeki_breeki
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bfbfbdie8

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