Comments of chapter undefined of The Ashen Keeper (Marvel x Dark Souls x Bloodborne)

I have no complaints other than chapter 12, it seemed a little bit rushed, but that's just me talking.

Just add somethings for the character herself.Just don't be like the many fanfics where they add there character and nothing changes wouldn't bother if it was like that. Also try to make it so she will have her own story instead of everything being in a group. That's the problem of the comics where everyone has to be there and the character doesn't show growth alone.Last other p.o.vs of people would be much appreciated. So ty for chap just feel the fanfic is following the route of the movies without wanting to add anything new but I'll just leave it as the early chapters for now

feels like a chapter was skipped

It's a good idea to only stick with marvel and dark souls as that's already plenty to fill anything, more characters won't necessarily mean better story , great volume so far and looking forward for the future! 😄

A única coisa que tá me dando coseira e que ela não ajudou alguém a ficar mais forte, transformando almas ou seila o que em força, e outra coisa legal seria ela trazer ou invocar os antigos cynders ia ser foda Gwyn dando um pau no Thanos.

Very much enjoying the story

I love it so far dude

The first volume started off really good. The ending though needs some work. It feels forced and empty. You introduced someone like the fire keeper from dark souls with the power of the first flame, and made her able to weaken and subdue Thor easily. Yet her only impact on the marvel plot so far has been her introduction as a new character into marvel, and the amount of casualties. Other than these two things it feels like a copy paste of the marvel movie plot. My advice is to slow it down a little bit to allow for more interaction between characters, and also show the others POV. Slow it down so we can actually see the impact she has on the other characters through the interactions they have not only with her, but each other. Show the others POV so we can see into their head and what they think about the fire keeper and her actions, clothes, speech, or powers. And finally show a little more of the "in-between" between conflicts and major events so we can see the fire keeper in daily life and the impact it has on the common people.

Loved itttttttttttttttttt Thank you for the chapter

Thanks for the awesome Volume! 🙇💕

Thanks for the chapter

author did you still have a plan to put dc hero because i like hero like superman and batman. also i think mc is famous around the world because she is a healer that can cure every disease or even a near death injury or heal your eyes or arms. because after this she is definitely famous.

thank you for the chapter i am looking forward to see what you come up with

good first volume