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Comments of chapter undefined of The First Soul (40k)

Skill_Top
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I don’t like that he became like this. Absolute Justice does not exist for everyone, this is a different concept. I also don’t like that he is now a walking good-natured person. We wanted to see an ancient creature in Warhammer 40,000 and not some kind of Buddha. If he is not selfish and there is no anger in him and the desire for revenge after all this I’m not interested in him

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Skill_Top
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Author, I really like your story and it's been great so far, but I don't like this character move, I still think I'll follow the story. Thank you for such a wonderful story.

Matheu_DeWitt:Oh, but justice needs to extract the debt owed. I don't understand why he needs to be angry, when he can just apathetically take back what the Old Ones once stole.

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Aaron_Seddon_0599
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I looked upon this and thought it good[img=recommend]

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kokishorttail
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Pretty nice chapter. depending on how the things talked about are implemented, I can see this story become either top quality or annoying. hope to see good things from it in the future.

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Noname_nobody
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Really good book. I don’t really know why you r writing fanfic, not your own book, because this is very good quality 😌

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_DEKIM_
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Perfect.✨✨✨

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Daoist2adybY
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Es mejor que el 75% de los fanfic que muestran un prota hambriento de poder, poderes de vacío o oscuridad y que tienen Harem de la emperatriz de la humanidad o una primarca de un universo alterno, esta historia la siento más un respiro a los clichés. Posdata espero que hagan rana asada los C'tan.

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heaven_sunder
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I'm a huge warhammer fan, and I got a huge inspiration from this book. When the next chapter is posted, I'm going to give a wall of text about my thoughts. I hope this will be helpful. I am sorry in advance

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cheeki_breeki
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love what you did with mc, it was worth the wait

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Vision_of_mind
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Thanks for the chapter I can't wait for more

Jin_Kazaragi
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Merci pour le chapitre !

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ManasCiel
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Thanks for the chapters! Just binge read them all!

Daoist866791
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thanks for the chapter

Silver_Stellier
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Manners maketh man.

John_Grandline
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ForkMe
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YAYYY MC is bac

JarOfOz
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Thanks for the chap!

DryComplementary
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Hard read, but I’m thinking Arlow gonna develop some kind of Biblical Job-story-level type justice of the universe. Hope to see more development!

Rico321
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thanks

DaoistF0koDD
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¡Gracias por el capítulo! 😁 👍