Akasaki_Ryujin
Honestly I would stop reading the moment you decided to write the MC's consecutive tantrums, It is unpleasant to read, I think you applied too much realism, so much so that the reaction is exaggerated, it is like what we all imagine would happen in a mental breakdown, I think that making it less realistic would make everything more fluid, realism is a good resource but you can't apply it to the entire fanfic because obviously this is a fanfic