Comments of chapter undefined of Life Can Change || DC x Invincible Fic
Life Can Change || DC x Invincible Fic
TheManUnderTheBed
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Mark feels almost overpowered. Which has me worried because if he's already this strong how powerful was somebody like Thragg. It feels like you buff the Viltrumite while toning down the powers of the kryptonians a little bit. The league is acting way out of character, especially Batman and Superman. I know Batman is extreme but this feels extreme for even for him. I'm assuming Superman has been influenced by some type of evil force or something. That's the only way would he do would make sense. It seems you're setting up a villain turn from for Mark. I can see him possibly joining the Viltrumite empire because of what the league has done. Overall good chapter I'm interested to see what's going to happen next.
🦠For the ‘good guys’ to be exposing a pregnant kara to kyptonite is more than a little uncalled for. If she had a miscarriage as a result of their actions they would have ended a friendship and created a supervillain. It wouldn’t matter what kind of reason they have for their actions, nothing could justify the killing of one’s child in the eyes of a mother.
