Comments of chapter undefined of Jujutsu Reincarnation: Unleashing The Ten Shadows In Naruto
Does anybody feel anything for this? Author, most people are probably waiting for him to age up. We also need time to become familiar and connected with a character. You can't just... start a story describing how much angst a character is feeling and expect readers to feel emotional. You as the writer imagining this whole situation are more invested and connected with the mc than we are rn. This will probably be true for another 10 or 20 chapters depending on how long it takes everyone to form an emotional connection.
You know, every element of the visible world (to is readers) shows is that the kyuubi rampage had yet to happen. When You Watch the anime the info that the 4th “killed” the kyuubi and died while doing só is hammered on Your head just as much as good roger’s about the one piece. The first info this dude gets is that the 4th is still around, i can only conclude that he cant remember Even how to wipe his own bum after going to the Toilet or he’s a r-word, none of those are good. It wouldnt really change the outcome but this sure puts into question if hes capable to function in society.
now this was interesting honestly, having him get partially get over the "reincarnation implications drama" only to have the main reason he's trying to do so be completely eradicated from his life, wonder how he'll grow up.This partially answered some of the problems I had previous chapter, the unique direction was there, the pay off just had to wait an extra chapter, fortunately I have some semblance of patience or I might have missed this out (I still stand on those opinions but this chapter choice was also very good)
It's actually going well, but I feel like there's been a little more building in his relationship with his parents. You know, make the reader get a little more attached before they're killed. And yes, it would be interesting to see a mini-arc of him dealing with that sense of loss. (although I'm too late to suggest that LOL)
Also to anyone wondering if we have to feel bad for the parents, lol obviously not, we know almost nothing of them, it's quite clear that the focus is entirely on how Akira feels about what's happening, he is the one who should make people emotional since he's losing his 2nd family just after having finally accepted it.
