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Comments of chapter undefined of Lion King: Son of Mufasa

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Daoist350861
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update please

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Rusty_noddle12
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WHO'S COMPLAINING!? I'LL BEAT'EM UP! YOU DON'T LIKE HOW THE AUTHOR WANTS THE STORY.. inhale.. THEN MAKE YOUR OWN.

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DevilsArray
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Why do I think you are just doing what ya want but putting on it on your viewers? 😂

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Kenai12_
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Ignore haters, no actual advice just hate, do what you wanna do it’s been amazing so far anyways

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Ishinnn
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The story is incredible and unique. The only thing that bothers me is that Mc isn't going to be King. Simba doesn't fit the role, he should be like a general or Mc's hand. LOL

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thesacredmenace
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Please author don’t change your story because of comments. Reader let him cook

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hlh987655321
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thank you for the awesome chapters and I hope you have a wonderful week

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Kleber_Silva
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Honestly, the idea for this fanfic was good, I loved how you made it so that his future knowledge wouldn't interfere with the course of the story, but this guilt that Asafa feels seems very forced, I know you want to do something more dramatic and impactful but It's poorly done, he didn't have all his memories to have a credible reason to disobey scar, his instincts warned him but he was still inexperienced, his excessive self-blame is not justified, I'm going to keep reading this story because I really liked it, especially the oc's like Ayana and Imani, but if you're going to rewrite this story I recommend looking for another reason for him to stay away from home.

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Rochirush
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Kunutunukeks
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Just do it man

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Gilgamos
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Mc x narla??

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Ishinnn
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Thanks for the chapter!

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Jollybee
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I dont care what others think, you shouldn't either. The only thing i really dislike so far is hes not OP enough.

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Daoistu7e9tj
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strait up gaslighting us

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Zorak_Zzz
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10/10[img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]

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Carai_Borracha
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Mike_Davis
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You do you man.. Seriously always turns out better that way.

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Godlyghostwatcher
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AstrosBR
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author-sam, you could make the world's spiritual energy return, allowing animals to evolve traits or even evolve into a higher species, you could make a world without humans where each animal would create its own kingdom or government, where the stronger and more evolved, they would have a better social position, it would be incredible (I was sorry for the grammar, I used Google translate to write this)

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Carlos_Henrique_4295
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Obrigado pelo capĂ­tulo e continue com o bom trabalho, estou ansioso esperando por mais capĂ­tulos.