Comments of chapter undefined of HxH: adventure of a lifetime

no one would have minded if you actually had him place Vow on his ability himself, but you took the usual Nerf route, and that set people off.If Mc had done it without losing his powers and on his own, people would have been impressed instead.

You wrote yourself into a corner. The merchant was providing good items too frequently. So you were left with one option. Nerf the merchant. i wish the mthod would've been better, but it makes sense. I usually wait 2-3 chapters before deciding if I want to drop, which, for the moment, I will keep reading.

I completly agree with you author. You have to remember angry people will always be the loudest

Spider sense was the best ability so I'm out. I'm fine with needs but the way you did it was just bad.

Nerf is bad in any way and any story the only ppls that like those kinds of stories are the weird ppls who get orgamz for MCs to get Nerf and suffer in the whole story.

Nerf in the store was nice, new contract power is interesting, was it really necessary for him to lose his spider sense? Wasn't returning the lucky socket enough? And apparently he didn't get a mangekyou hahaha only the kamui ability in exchange for an eye, that I thought was terrible

I didn't mind the nerf . If every mc gets everything without even doing anything it makes the stories just too boring , he'll just get continuously stronger . Now this development will make mc struggle and much more cautious .Also who gets excited over getting new powers so easily .

that contract part is unnecessary that may trap you again in your own writing and you have to nerf, drop or worse, you might turn your story into an unreadable mess.

yeah, ok i kinda understand that the merchant is too op and needs to be nerf and now its start to make sense. and yeah you did run into a dead end there

Thanks for the chapterWish you well authorKeep up the good work

Thanks for the chapter. For the people that are dissatisfied with the previous chapter, I recommend waiting a few more chapters and let the author work on his story before dropping it for one thing 🤷‍♂️.

Well Said Author, To Those Foolish Readers Who Complain, Kick Them Home, We Are Here To Read And Give A Healthy Opinion And If Some Fools Are Toxic On Twitter, Let Them Go Away From This Fanfic And Look For Another, Good Chapter

being able to trade with anyone seems more op than the merchant if he can buy talents off people such as talent in nen manipulation, talent in combat, talent in running etc

Author pls continue 😭🙏😭 u were at the good part too,plssss

What happened? Was it the fault of the toxic readers who made the author leave? Or The Author Made 13 14 And Left Us Abandoning His Story....... Oh Just Taking A Small And Long Vacation, well Just See Other Stories Until I Update

Hahhaha for me it's good then became bad hahha go drop I don't care, it's not that the skill is free, he finished the quest then get the reward, the reward nerf into nen and another have a condition to fulfill is that not enough, the merchant didn't tell that the item he get use on the merchant box itself it's he's own negligence, and spider sence didn't activate inside the merchant shop then why the knuckle can, hmmmmmm 🤔

Author did you drop it?

any updates?

I guess the author lost the motivation to continue the story, probably it's dropped. Like all fanfictions here !😂

i think that could've been tastefully in so many way instead of merchant punishing him physically and taking away his power treating mc like a slave to his own nen. some nice way were: #Merchant power was overdrawn and need 1 year to recover, ##merchant now need 1 month to reappear since it broken the world law ###since mc cheated merchant seal the power of kamui into basic sharingan and mc to train and open it step by step etc...