Comments of chapter undefined of Chronicles of the Multiversal Wanderer

not gonna lie felt cringe and a little bit forced . Also . why would he have anxiety all of sudden . Choosing between your previous life and current transmigrator life would be quite a dilemma

Too forced for my taste it made me lose all interest good luck people ch

It was cringe, but I've read worse novels/fanfics, I think most authors go through this, you get better with experience, good luck. (Google translator)

Could you stop with the author notes? You can add them at the end. Your readers aren't entirely brain dead, same thing with the info dumps or explaining yourself, no reason to waste a paragraph. Ruins the flow of the story.

Okay this is hard to read but not because of what you might think Author. I don't get why you need to interrupt in the middle of the story and explain youself? And why are you admitting it's bad and cringe? That is another level of insecure. You are the Author and as much as you need to value you readers opinion, in the end we are here to read YOUR story. Please don't do this again. Be confident. Just look at me, I started my latest novel with an NTR!! I feel that you could write this way better but you limit yourself in fear that it might come off as cringe or bad. Just let youself go and write. Stay hard.-The Goat.

For one, thank you. I agree this was cringe, but it's like you said a "practiced character development" which makes it fine. On to the next topic. I like this book so far im invested. The only "downside" it has is that i have to wait for chapters. Thank you author (I forgot your name) no offense.

I understand what you're trying to do (or convey), I really do, but what you've added is unnecessary. Especially if you do it badly. It's better to have it from the beginning. Like another reader said. "If you ask others to be patient with you, That means you're in trouble." (GOOGLE translate)

this is a hella forceful character development, seeing how it's literally been three days since he's been in that world, like seriously, i would have expected something like this if he spent at the very least a month in the world to actually gain any type of feelings for any of them, but three days? no, nah ah, at least Po had a week and a half or more to at the very least form any bonds with them.

Hum...

Yeah it was strange, bc first he was a normal guy with god, after that you made him a copy cat of Jin with all pride bs and out nowhere you transformed him in a wimpy? Did Jin personality just disappeared from nothing?

Nah pal. This chapter was not good at all. That entire anxiety and character development came out of nowhere and made everything felt so forced and unnatural to read.

I've already suffered from this, and it's quite bizarre, when I was little I went to a beach and out of nowhere it seemed that everyone had left, it was dawn and there were only about 12 people but it seemed that I was alone and even looking I didn't see anyone, until my mother called me and she was there by my side... I thought I was crazy.

Nah, this so called "Character Development" is stupidly forced, this is some akikan level of development, just pure randomness

Thanks for chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter I like cookies

Terrible place and time to do this whole crisis thing. Maybe should of happen the morning of him waking up or while trying to sleep.

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