Malamber
man I'm sad now lol I honestly really want you to stay where you are now, nothing to change, just move on, if you're going to redo something or start from scratch I think I'm going to slap you until I come to some sense in your head. Regarding the powers, I can accept how they are being developed, I'm really enjoying seeing the relationship and I certainly don't want to wait any longer to see it unfold. So please, get on with your work in real life and come back to us with some new chapters
Personally I like this story as is and wouldn’t mind waiting for it to come back after you get situated the only thing I would like to see just to make a story arc is maybe making the mc and Pamela find a female clone made of marshon dna and poison ivy about Garfields/beast boy age and who has the power of the green like the red the mc has. So they find out that the people who cloned him want the power of not only the red but green and other colors as well… just an idea you don’t need to add it
It feels like you have a lot of the protagonist's powers, For that you give him a system with which he can transform any being into any animal and acquire skills from those races or monsters, thus giving him more power but he would have to train his body. But how are you doing, you are fine but you don't give a little to his body and he gets very tired using it and he has a stupid restriction with the red