gotta say i wasn't expecting this but its way better this way

love the reference

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yep i probably would've done the same

definitely been waiting to hear his plans not surprised but still excited

pretty realistic interpretation of what would actually happen

its starting off nicely. Can't wait to see his power really grow

neat idea hopefully he gets awesome later

hey man are u gonna continue this story? its one of the best stories I've ever read and hate to see stay as small as it is. this has so much potential that you could realize if u continue. whether you do or do not won't change that it is an amazing story but it could be so much more!

great chapter

first that is not what the bible says about relationships second nice take on the encounter with these two groups

wonder what his x gene can do

the next chapter is is gonna be awesome. i thought one rider was bad but 5 is suicidal to go against

can't wait for the next chapter

great story building chapter. i wish your parents a happy anniversary

that was amazing progress. wonder how much of a change it made

you know i think that design is slightly better than alien x

thats gonna be quite the conversation between peter and that dragon

can't wait for akira vs kokabiel

the next chapter is either gonna be something really good or really bad either way can't wait