Comments of chapter undefined of The New World Player

author bro everything is a little rushed i feel ...one time he got transmigrated nxt sec he got chaos power but cant use it ... nxt thing every one knows him since he killed a monster dog... everything is a little cliche make him powerful or gove him a powerful mentality man... otherthan that story is overly good keep going

This book has potential but from what I have read so far I feel it's rushed and also the author needs to work on the spelling and grammar he uses [img=strong]

What is the point of having a rank system when you can defeat a monster 5 ranks higher then you with no problem. I swear all these novels try to copy APOV but only copy the worst parts of it. At least in APOV ranks actually had meaning. This novel is also moving may to fast. There is zero concept of pacing in this.

very forceful