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Gizmo_48

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  • Gizmo_48
    Gizmo_482mth
    Commented

    I think the phrase “Steam Punk World” has been said 15 times in the last two chapters. I think we get it.

    Ch 2 Brass-Adorned Body
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    Prince of Sentinels
    Fantasy · stickbUg
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  • Gizmo_48
    Gizmo_484mth
    Commented

    What is the point of having a rank system when you can defeat a monster 5 ranks higher then you with no problem. I swear all these novels try to copy APOV but only copy the worst parts of it. At least in APOV ranks actually had meaning. This novel is also moving may to fast. There is zero concept of pacing in this.

    Ch 7 Chapter 7: In The Eyes Of All (2)
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    The New World Player
    Fantasy · shadw
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  • Gizmo_48
    Gizmo_487mth
    Commented

    Good start, as long as you keep at it and also not have the side characters forgive the MC easily I can see it becoming a good novel.

    Ch 4 Zagan's Crimes.
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    The Trashy NTR Dude's POV
    Fantasy · AGENT_ALT
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  • Gizmo_48
    Gizmo_487mth
    Commented

    Is this going to be a misunderstanding trope novel. These types of novels often suck since they heavily relay on the stupidity of the side characters.

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  • Gizmo_48
    Gizmo_487mth
    Commented

    Sounds like they are awful guards for a princess.

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  • Gizmo_48
    Gizmo_487mth
    Commented

    Please no, please do not be one of these novels where everyone just immediately forgivese mc with zero reason without have to earn it and all female characters automatically fall in love with him because he says “Please and thank you” to them

    As Varron's words washed over her, Melissa felt a strange sensation in her chest. It was a warmth, a fluttering that made her feel light. It was a feeling she didn't recognize, but it was undeniably pleasant. Could it be happiness? She wasn't sure. All she knew was that it was a response to Varron's unexpected kindness.
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    Writer Is Now A Villain
    Fantasy · Kiku_Kayu
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  • Gizmo_48
    Gizmo_487mth
    Posted

    Good start, I prefer the novels with a mc that are not just straight up chaotic evil for zero reason. The mc is more netrual. The world seem like your average eroge plot novel but with a souls like leveling.

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    The Trashy NTR Dude's POV
    Fantasy · AGENT_ALT
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  • Gizmo_48
    Gizmo_487mth
    Commented

    Great, we have another slave system.

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  • Gizmo_48
    Gizmo_487mth
    Commented

    I thought they were a count not a earl.

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  • Gizmo_48
    Gizmo_488mth
    Commented

    30,000 years* 300,000 if you include the earliest evolutions of bipedal sapianes

    Well, after living two thousand years - almost three thousand years - they advanced rapidly from a caveman to a physics man.
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    Devil's Cry
    Fantasy · PrinceClover
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  • Gizmo_48
    Gizmo_4810mth
    Commented

    Ichnose is probably the one spreading the rumours

    "Well, that might be true. Mako-chan also goes to the gym. Oh, but the rumor about calling Ichinose to your room is definitely baseless, right?"
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    Classroom Of The Elite Year 2
    Realistic · KyoIshigami
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  • Gizmo_48
    Gizmo_4810mth
    Commented

    Yet your having him spy on a girl like a creep?

    "I'm sorry, but I have no intention of discussing it further. We're teacher and student, after all. It's not a conversation we need to have."
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    Classroom Of The Elite Year 2
    Realistic · KyoIshigami
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  • Gizmo_48
    Gizmo_4810mth
    Commented

    How does he know this? I feel like the author is constantly giving the mc knowledge that he should not have. Seems like it was suppose to be a transmigation story but changed it to regression to have it more unique

    Well, it was natural considering how 'good' she was with directions. But it's not like I was going to help, it was none of my business. ...Anyways, let's sleep a little.
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    Rebirth of the Ruined Noble
    Fantasy · Emberlight
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  • Gizmo_48
    Gizmo_4810mth
    Commented

    These massive personalities changes without reason in fantasy worlds make no sense. People would automatically assume the worst such as possession, mindcontrol, ect… I always prefer the novels that slowly change their personality then immediately

    Ch 2 What the heck is going on!! (Part 2)
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    Transmigrated into Patriarchal Kingdom: Won’t Abandon my Values!
    Fantasy · Andrew_3058
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  • Gizmo_48
    Gizmo_4810mth
    Posted

    Enjoyable novel. The mc is very likeable and the side character have been very unique. It is to early to comment on the world building but it is a more unique spin of the steam punk fantasy with early technology world. The main down fall is the grammer. It is readable tho and does not cause much of a headache.

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  • Gizmo_48
    Gizmo_4810mth
    Replied to Nikujiu

    It was never mentioned before.

    I have to use the spells wisely or I'll be out of mana,in this group I am the only one who is a two star mage, otherwise everyone is above three stars and Zark is the only one at five stars.
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    No More Pain For This Villain.
    Fantasy · Satan03
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  • Gizmo_48
    Gizmo_4810mth
    Commented

    The power system in the novel is useless. What is the whole point of the system and stats? What is the point of magic levels? Ren has killed everyone with ease despite being only rank 2. He has killed multiple rank 3s with no problem and with magic so his previous life experience can’t be an excuse.

    With a flash of movement, the battle commenced. I launched a fiery barrage, sending firebolts streaking through the air, each one finding its mark with deadly precision. The crackling flames engulfed the bandits, causing them to cry out in pain as their clothes caught fire.
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    No More Pain For This Villain.
    Fantasy · Satan03
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  • Gizmo_48
    Gizmo_4810mth
    Commented

    Is this a Chinese young master mc? His massive ego is getting annoying

    "So is it always this quiet here?" Ren asked Anabelle in a low voice.
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    No More Pain For This Villain.
    Fantasy · Satan03
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  • Gizmo_48
    Gizmo_4810mth
    Commented

    Why does he always disguise him self it is just slowing down any progression.

    Ch 162 [Event] [Enigma Red Dungeon] [23] Golden Awakening
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    I Am The Game's Villain
    Fantasy · NihilRuler
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  • Gizmo_48
    Gizmo_4810mth
    Commented

    There are way too many groups that are all attacking at the same time. It is just making things confusing with all of these POV changes every 5 paragraphs.

    The most renowned and dangerous assassins of the world. The Assassins of [Caishen], an organization of hitmen—contracted killers.
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    I Am The Game's Villain
    Fantasy · NihilRuler
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