Comments of chapter undefined of The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) [Complete]

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Luna Lovegood, Ginny Weasley, Cho Chang, Narcissa Malfoy, Bellatrix Lestrange, Lily Evans, Nymphadora Tonks, Fleur Delacour, Hermione Granger, Pansy Parkinson

This Fleur seems too false, too irrational. But thanks for the chapter

Yeah feels rushed for me too, kinda pointless and stupid chapter in my opinion definitely could do it better.

thanks for the chapters

quality chapter author

Thanks for the chapter 👍

Great & funny lemon 🍋

Just way over did the bit with Fluer. It was kinda funny for the first bit of the chapter, but you just wouldn’t stop. Even when it was a lemon scene she was constantly annoying and one dimensional.

More chapter

Tftc

Thanks for the chap

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I thank you for the chapter.

Thanks for the chapter.

Thank for good chapter.

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Thanks for the chapter ! 😁 👍