Ayko_7521
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He was going to rest for 5 days...
Must have eaten a lot of flies huh
Then it's stupid that in an earlier chapter she was able to put points into agility and endurance. It shouldn't be possible with what is said here
I thought it was explained that the status was only a reflection of the capabilities of the user in this novel, one that doesn't allow modification in other words... Honestly, all those system novels are bad as soon as they allow too much freedom in what is possible, I'm already cautious going forward because of this
I guess it is just a matter of taste in this single instance. I recognize a good and well-written story when I read though, and I'm not as narrow-minded or intolerant to feel insecure about some small stuff like this. Some things just get me worked up in the moment, and against better judgement, I tend to be quite harsh vocally at those times and disregard the positive things unjustly. I want to take this opportunity to express that I really enjoyed the story and still do at this point, and will continue reading. Don't let the negative comments affect your vision for the story too much. I know I couldn't possibly write a quality novel or fanfic myself, so I always advocate for writers to follow their own creative process. Stories tend to be better that way, even during the times that some parts make it personally less enjoyable. That just makes it complete. I don't mind being it that way in the end
I don't care about Snape's supposed backstory to be honest. I'd rather find myself comfortably feeling superior without having second thoughts. I'm not here wanting to associate with Snape, I'm here to escape reality and not be confronted with the fact that everyone else also has problems in life
Sounds like a jab to almost all other webnovels
sounds like a wraith or puppet
I have read some ff's before where Snape was a very good guy.
oh nevermind, I thought he meant Heather
goddaughter
How can she see what is written on her choker? Shouldn't that be physically impossible?
Wouldn't it end up being more wet and moist?