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Comments of chapter undefined of Champion: Shazam in the M.C.U.

Aeternabilis
AeternabilisLv13Aeternabilis

THIS MAKES NO SENSE!! I’m have drop for a bit and see where it goes with the titles to see if I to continue or not. Everything that has happend so far just purely impossible to happen. Ignore the bs of the last few chapters and take this one as an example. Master of order and chaos came in to stop Gia from destroying reality? To calm her down? When the one who is at fault is Mephisto? For taking a soul that doesn’t belong to him? Don’t even mention he was able to hide it from them as he doesn’t have that power

Jam28
Jam28Lv15Jam28

You know I’m gonna abandon this novel for a minute and stack up on chapters. I hate waitig in suspense and then get left hanging hahaha

somerandomkid_17
somerandomkid_17Lv4somerandomkid_17

Thanks for the chapter and well wherever this fanfic is going is ambitious at the very least. Wouldn't be surprised if you get a bunch of webnovel readers bombing your reviews or saying dropped, they usually have the patience of a dog with rabies

cheeki_breeki
cheeki_breekiLv13cheeki_breeki

you've bumped up mephisto to powers hes not anywhere near, hes kinda fodder and ur making it out that he has enough power to hid things from orfer and chaos

Sakra95
Sakra95Lv2Sakra95

So this loser knew the earth was going to be destroyed in 24 hours and still died from a nuke while people like Fury are still alive. Than Mephisto stole his stole and when Gaia raged to get it back Order and Chaos sided with Mephisto instead of her? The story hadn't even properly began and you did an arc like this not to mention the false advertisement of this as a MC with Shazam powers.

DementionMan_626
DementionMan_626Lv4DementionMan_626

Tony Stark NEEDS to die, he's caused enough problems.

HeavenWillDaoist
HeavenWillDaoistLv15HeavenWillDaoist

that went from like 1 to 10 in a few secs💀

Misifus_7w7
Misifus_7w7Lv3Misifus_7w7

infinity758
infinity758Lv4infinity758

author I was there with you from the beginning and I liked the story but the way this is going makes no sense and is to forced I will still give it a chance but I need to know that this is not just random ideas your just writing right now

Lordtachanka
LordtachankaLv13Lordtachanka

i love this story but the suspense kills me, can you make chapters a bit more length

OnlyCanRead
OnlyCanReadLv3OnlyCanRead

I love your stories until this happens, in every single of the authors stories he does the same, It's nothing against the author but I hate this formula that the author so much loves; Putting the Mc in a situation where he ends in the short end even though he shouldn't, It's just frustrating for me personally and I hate this formula that the author keeps using. I guess I'll just stop reading and let the chapter stack.

Anthony_Higgin
Anthony_HigginLv4Anthony_Higgin

Thanks for the chapter.

Maximus_Duke
Maximus_DukeLv3Maximus_Duke

I'm kinda done with this fic.

Best_Human_Evil
Best_Human_EvilLv4Best_Human_Evil

Thanks for the chapter author-san. But:

TruthAlfa
TruthAlfaLv4TruthAlfa

👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

Celelond
CelelondLv12Celelond

Yeah, I know it carries on, but I am dropping it here. I see no point in reading something I am no longer enjoying. I would have given the reader something as a ray of hope.

Odiator_Opoto
Odiator_OpotoLv4Odiator_Opoto

At this point, I am just confused. things are escalating way too quickly. I'll stockpile some chapters. the suspense is killing me. 😭

creekinny
creekinnyLv2creekinny

Nossa realmente não sei onde tudo isso vai levar, mas estou chocado que a alma dele foi roubada principalmente por que sempre pensei que os mortais mais influenciados pelos deuses geralmente não lidam com outros seres de fora como demônios, Billy como visto tem muitas bençãos a própria Gaia entrou em batalha pelo desrespeito Eu quero muito ver como está o arrogante Tony Stark, meus parabéns inclusive por destruir a Terra e matar bilhões, e claro colocar Asgard em perigo também, afinal esse Ultron de alguma forma veio do futuro e fez um trabalho meticuloso em destruir tudo que é uma ameaça para ele

Raffael_Santis
Raffael_SantisLv11Raffael_Santis

Kacper_Cwajda
Kacper_CwajdaLv3Kacper_Cwajda

Thanks for the chapter