Comments of chapter undefined of Desire of Immortality (Harry Potter AU)

Story wise, it honestly wasn't much, but you must have done something right, I read the whole thing and found it interesting. Also, extra credit for writing something readable!Great Job!

Great job!! Although the story was very short but the general development of the plot is also quite good to be a long story with a overpowered mc if you slow his growth a little and add a little challenges but this one was already an excellent evil mc sadly we never got to see his mother in the end

Good job!

Author, when will you continue to write ? I like your work for its straightforwardness and brevity.

Hi author, despite the fact that the fanfic is very short, I liked the action, so I want to offer you an idea for a new fan fiction, I say right away this idea is based on the 2010s animated series about transformers, if you are interested in it, write to me.

thanks for the chapter. and especially for completing it. even though it was fast-paced had fun reading it.will be waiting for you new work hope to see you soon.

Plz write more books

Wonderful work, I really liked it.

the author may be a beginner, but a good one, I will follow his work. inspiration to him!

Perfect soon

Please come to read it, that became you're advised on reading manhwa. I'd able to glad to write this book. I want to be first one to come reply in paragraphs

My new book is airing. Solo Leveling: New generation

I can talk to you a bit

I liked it even though it was short it was readable and fun to read

Add fanfiction status - Completed.

TYSMFTC

Thanks for the chapters