thanks for all the chapters!

thanks for the chapter. nice building and conveying of emotions

thanks for the book. good start, definitely nice so far.

thanks for all the chapters! the last few chapters have been a huge jump in quality. Its nice to see the development of your writing style.

cool update thanks

I like it. very unique. if anyone has similar recommendations I'd appreciate them.

my grandfather just passed also, I know it can be tough. cherish the time this holiday season. merry Christmas

story is currently about half way through chapter 5 if you look it up on ff.net

+1

thanks for the update

you gotta register on it to see NSFW stuff

although it was fast, nice job finishing it.

very enjoyable chapter, good to see updates.

it is unfortunate, I was expecting this to be an update.. glad you are having fun. I may stop by or at least give a twitch follow as support.

regarding the whole lannister and Tyrrel debate, just do what you want for the story, don't lock yourself into polling additions only to write yourself into a corner and/or lose motivation. What do the tyrells have to offer though? Didn't the Prussian forces take the reach? I personally think the lannister is a viable option, and that the ruthlessness would be cool. MC and tywin would indefinitely fall out, probably over some stupid thing (ex clegane doing foul acts on smallfolk which would compound other incompatibilities). I would enjoy the cersei redemption arc, she is super young and conversion or humility could be shocking for her. the whole character arc of breaking her dileusions of grandeur and realizing her inadequacies could be moving.

I thought cersei would be cool because its not like he and tywin are going to be buddy buddy, its all a matter of convenience. the Prussian have their idea for the long con, plus I was interested to see a certain redemption, who knows she could find her faith. I just thought it would give some unique avenues to develop. sure Canon cersei is insufferable, but she is super young and this point. she shouldn't be as jaded, just a sheltered girl with overinflated sense of her own importance...

this

very interesting story, I was not sure based of the synopsis, but I am glad I gave it a shot. I am looking forward to the city building and politics. also the tarly being recruited. would be nice if Wilhelm got them on board and then just put them over oldtown before handing it over.

thanks for the chapter, I wonder how the date ends

thanks for the update