It was wonderful to be the grandson of a mad king.

Hello author, please remove the villain tag, it does not suit him. All you will get from him are negative comments and ratings.

WelI've read 19 chapters, it's not very interesting, the hero is boring, uninteresting, and the decision that a person will be the king of demons is super stupid, most likely in reality such a king was immediately removed, and not only from people. And one more thing, HE'S NOT A DAMN VILLAIN.

That's how it is, it says it almost directly)))

I think this is a test, a test for attentiveness of the readers.

I hope not, that would be terrible.

An extremely well-thought-out plot. If anything, I read the fanfic again, and now it's clear what that prophecy was about, it's the death of the first body!

Such is her fate, at least we, the readers, are not watching another hero who loves her to the depths of his soul, and is ready to die for her(And yes, for me the hero and the main one are one and the same, so I can't find fault).

It's more convenient for me, the hero or the main character is the same, there is 1 hero, and all the other characters.

It's fun. There is no need to delete the chapter.

I agree with one man, he doesn't look like a villain, sacrifice HIMSELF for whom? Who knows what kind of woman she is.

These are not good times, people want blood, tin and spectacles. So if you want to write fan fiction, you need to write about a very cruel and bloodthirsty hero, a sociopath or a real psychopath. If you try to write something newer, lighter, well, the market is busy, I can't say that it will attract a large number of people.

It feels ridiculous. As for me, it's time for you to end the story, because it turns into Chinese, where after the birth of a child, the hero becomes softer, you can tell me that there are so many novels and fan fiction, and I will tell you that this is mainly in Chinese novels, where the hero is not a villain, but after the appearance of a beloved woman or women, And children become fluffy bunnies. There is no point in continuing the novel, he is the top of the chain, and I can't say that the hero is interesting, challenges are needed, and when you avoid a fight with someone who can cause you small problems, well, it's boring.

Yes, it's definitely a good thing, because when the hero initially plans one thing, but he starts to like it, and then he has to pull off a riskier plan, a much riskier one. And this applies not only to women, but also to family, friends, and in general to the lules for whom the hero is not indifferent.

I completely agree with you. Fast is due to the immortality of the hero, I am also pleased with a very well-developed villain, and he is also a hypocrite, he wants to do something good, but then when it did not work out, he did it as usual, and said: he will do it in the next life, he does not strive to be a good person, but does what is profitable and rational.

I'm sure Oliver will be able to find dragon eggs, then what difference does it make Deinerys if I have dragons or not. But he can use Targaryen blood as a significant claim to the throne, and even if Dany gets to him as a virgin, and not a woman, reputation is important after all.

By the way, English is not my first language, so mistakes are possible.

It's not enough. And the hero can't do it with Deinerys on his own, thereby he will get both dragons and a faithful wife, who will not have to be programmed anew, and having fun in the body of the grandson of the "mad king" looks like a good idea.

He became attached to his parents too quickly, and that's affection... I have serious doubts about the potential of this fanfic, and hasn't he seen and heard that his "parents" saved him and cared for him so diligently, that he is a ticket to a safe and possibly happy future for THEM.

I really like it. I like the fact that the hero is not a heroic person, because in Game of Thrones this is clearly superfluous, and those who write about heroes in such universes are clearly idealists, so maybe they don't understand something. The story is good, the hero can die to his heart's content, the main thing is that the resource is there😏😏😏