Cedric_7512
you are doing great and i love your story, but i feel icould have upgraded the same scene. you just ruined the talk between tywin and escanor, where instead of just writing that tywin broke his hand, i would have written the whole dialogoue, like this. Escanor said "The next time you take as much as a hair off my brother, my blood for your legacy," Escanor looks down at Tywin from the high ground "I will kill you, Tywin Lannister." Look, i love your story, its just that i needed this talk, this dialogue from escanor. i would have started my own escanor story but i unfortunately i do not have the time, otherwise i would have continued my other works.