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  • vtkun
    vtkun6d
    Commented

    ta bem ?

    Ch 76 Dawn Of Super Heroes
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  • vtkun
    vtkun1mth
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter

    Ch 242 Chapter XLVI: Moving Forward
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    Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale
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  • vtkun
    vtkun3mth
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    thanks for the chapter

    Ch 199 Chapter III: The Dawnguard
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  • vtkun
    vtkun3mth
    Commented

    thank you for the chapter

    Ch 191 Chapter LIV: Blasphemy
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  • vtkun
    vtkun3mth
    Replied to daniel_rahn

    the burning thing made me think of extremis

    Ch 20 20 - Jedi Saiyan
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    Multiverse-Crafter
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  • vtkun
    vtkun4mth
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter

    Ch 181 Chapter XLIV: The End Of Glory
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    Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale
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  • vtkun
    vtkun4mth
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter

    Ch 180 Chapter XLIII: Labyrinthian (Part 2)
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  • vtkun
    vtkun4mth
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter

    Ch 24 Where Are We?
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    Fate/Fisted
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  • vtkun
    vtkun4mth
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter

    Ch 176 Chapter XXXIX: Family Matters
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    Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale
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  • vtkun
    vtkun4mth
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter

    Ch 19 Easy Wom-
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  • vtkun
    vtkun4mth
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter

    Ch 172 Chapter XXXV: Firelord!
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  • vtkun
    vtkun4mth
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter

    Ch 17 Mirror Copy
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  • vtkun
    vtkun4mth
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter

    Ch 168 Chapter XXXI: Vacation
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  • vtkun
    vtkun4mth
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter

    Ch 167 Chapter XXX: Sun And Shadow
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  • vtkun
    vtkun4mth
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter

    Ch 165 Chapter XXVIII: Subtlety, what is that?
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  • vtkun
    vtkun4mth
    Commented

    hahahhaha thanks for the chapter

    Ch 12 Yank vs London
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  • vtkun
    vtkun4mth
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter

    Ch 163 Chapter XXVI: The Hunt
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  • vtkun
    vtkun4mth
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter

    Ch 162 Chapter XXV: Ilinalta
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  • vtkun
    vtkun4mth
    Posted

    the premise is nice enough, but the story doesn't help, in the first place the thing about most of the side characters acting like npcs was awful. Way too many jumps in story points it feels almost disjointed , plot holes (of course),and a dash of grammar errors(not that i can throw any stones but its an early warning), some phrases take away immersion making characters feel even more robotic

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  • vtkun
    vtkun4mth
    Commented

    thanks for the chapters

    Ch 30 Chapter 030
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    Beta Testing the Apocalypse
    Anime & Comics · Einlion
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