Extra26
The story is going well. But it will be more intresting if u add something like a ticket to upgrade the shop, VR games where you can interact with moive, anime charecters and improve ur combat skills.You can add food supplements with amazing powers, can add AR which connects every cultivater and mortal peoples.Can add some low lev show whoch helps mortols gain power with thier hard work?Its story is intresting ... It would be good if u realise 2chaps per day for now. .when u become popular lunch 1ch per day. You know some people only read a novel if it has min no. Chapters...
This is the second time an author of another story recommended a story only for the story they recommended to be less than 20 chapters in and already not updated in 2 weeks. I'm going to stop listening to recommendations of other authors because they are just using their readers to help their friends and not help their readers find a good story.