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zero_crashed7dCommentedCh 28 Chaos Erupts Before Revenge is Taken- zero_crashed7dCommentedCh 1 The Country is About to be Destroyed, What Should We Do?
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He means to say that jean will be hers not some othersđ¸simple
Of course, if Alex felt jealous with a loving intention towards one of them, once he dealt with that problem, he would also try to help Jean get rid of these pedos, since a man three times her age or another man five or six times her age in love with her would be quite worrying. - zero_crashed1mthCommented
Plese stop using Ai
That's right! They had been living in this house for decades and paid a lot of rental fees over the years, and it was time for a change. Michael knew this would be a significant and meaningful gift for his mother, one that would provide her with security and happiness for years to come. - zero_crashed2mthCommentedCh 115 chapter 114
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Doremon?
Karui silently took out the super noise-canceling headphones that Miss Bulma invented not long ago. - zero_crashed2mthCommented
Imagine the person who turns 15 just a day after the examination đđ
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Its always a loophole where a very resourceful person jumps to save a old ladyfrom death... But in another world they will not even bother to save others if thier is no benifit đ
It was another day at the Gordon's Clan compound, and my name is Alec, I'll give you a quick explanation: I was reincarnated after a nasty motor accident while trying to save an old lady. - zero_crashed3mthReplied to Konrad_iguess
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This one
Blue Flames: Phoenix Cloak! (Suggested by Mr_Night!) - zero_crashed3mthCommented
Genetic Chinese people who can fell everything
He realized that he was a little more energetic than before. - zero_crashed3mthCommented
She? Handsome ?
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Y do he have to say about the future ? For example he is from Earth so he must have a basic knowledge about modern times. He can apply that to the devil fruits of the crew for example ace ,marco , that diamond guy,etc etcLets say he suggests to ace to compress his flame power to a tiny point then shoot them like lesar. Or a set of training where he have to surpass his temperature problem. It doesn't have to be obly the future. Thier are many things he could give his knowledge for example business , cooking, power concept , ship modifications , in one piece thier r many talented ppl who are only waiting for a intresting idea, even ron doesn't need to have full idea about the thing.. And read further if u really want to change the story even further-change the thought process of the mc like if thier is benifit then will he help, or he helped becz he was forced to, make it that he treats the whitebeard crew as his family...till now i feel ron feel detached from the crew.-it would be even good if u add good dialogues ...-add some quotes depending on situation-make ace even more powerful version of roger (my personal opinion đ )-make ron a charismatic charecter not a cold warrior character .. From the story i can say whitebeard pirates will be rons in future. . So he should be charismatic not a cold warrior
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Y is mc not helping the crew with his knowledge ? Y be so cold?
A/N:Â Please give the FF a Review. Whether you liked the translation, how you find the MC's character, any complaints you have for me, etc. Anything will do. - zero_crashed4mthReplied to Sabaroth_zarkiel
Thier is harem đ
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So no romance đ
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Ahhh. .. How is he sunny? It looks to mdE a third grade Chinese actor trying to be naive. But funny thing is instead of becoming naive he is becoming brainless idiot even than luffy
She couldn't help but appreciate the attractiveness of a man focused on his craft. Especially someone as handsome and sunny as Logan â when he concentrated, he was incredibly appealing! - zero_crashed5mthCommented
Its the first time i saw a mc typing msg in a group đ
"Guys, what the hell is happening? Are you seeing this?" Richard typed, his fingers trembling with every letter. - zero_crashed6mthReplied to Zasha1
Mc goes with flow where girls come and throw themselves to him with hearts in their eyes? đ
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