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KamikazeDrew3dReplied to StardustGlazeSomething a teenager going through their edgy phase would say
"It's said that Ignatis' members have been eagerly waiting. Once Sherlock dies, they'll immediately begin vying for the position of I-U's leader." Tohyama Kinji seemed to have learned the whole situation from Tohyama Kana and addressed Fang Li as well, "On the other hand, Daio wishes to select a leader capable of inheriting Sherlock's role, someone, who, like Sherlock, will continue to oversee I-U while delving into techniques."- KamikazeDrew3dCommented
It's Issei...
I stunned him before grabbing his arm and sending a non-lethal amount of electricity coursing through his body to hit nature's off button. This was rather awkward, I expected some wholesome kidnapping, I didn't expect to just walk in on the man yanking it. - KamikazeDrew4dCommented
Isn't being reincarnated better than being dead?
FUCK! - KamikazeDrew10dCommented
If he gets Homunculus creation would he need the unloyal Fallen as maids?
[Homunculous Creation Blueprint], [Sacred Gear Extraction Knowledge] - KamikazeDrew12dCommented
If the Order side members go around shouting things this is the MC going to start yelling about how it's his duty to sow chaos.
"Just die, idiot," the man said, catching his breath. "Balance must be restored." He was in his twenties, gaunt, but tall. His hands were long, his reach longer. There were greed and anger in his eyes, gleaming like two distinct lamps in a dark alley.detailMultiverse Systems: Demonic Resurrection in the Primordial TowerBook&Literature · droopyauthor - KamikazeDrew12dReplied to droopyauthor
When he was resurrected he said "He could feel the strength, for the first time, his peak." so that makes one think otherwise.
Ch 5 Code NamedetailMultiverse Systems: Demonic Resurrection in the Primordial TowerBook&Literature · droopyauthor - KamikazeDrew12dCommented
The fight in the first chapter seemes so epic but in reality from his stat values he's just a scrub.
Ch 5 Code NamedetailMultiverse Systems: Demonic Resurrection in the Primordial TowerBook&Literature · droopyauthor - KamikazeDrew12dCommented
It seems like a weird thing to draw attention to unless you are trying to draw attention to it. And then it makes it seem like he makes it a big part of his worth as a human, which is just as weird.
Kai was taller than her, making him look down into her dark eyes. She was beautiful. Thin leafy lips, full breasts, and a small waist, Kai sent his eyes down to her toes. "You didn't feel it on your back, I hope," Kai said apologetically, reminding her if she had forgotten about it. "I will appreciate it if you won't tell anyone."detailMultiverse Systems: Demonic Resurrection in the Primordial TowerBook&Literature · droopyauthor - KamikazeDrew12dCommented
I would rather have a petty MC than one that shrugs off things like that.
This paragraph has been deleted.detailMultiverse Systems: Demonic Resurrection in the Primordial TowerBook&Literature · droopyauthor - KamikazeDrew12dReplied to EphemeralKaos
I know it seems stupid to gamble on his life here.
"Around 20," Kai vaguely replied. The proof letter fell out of Desmond's hand, and even Sonia stumbled back. Arlen's face had gone blank, the anger vanishing off his face.detailMultiverse Systems: Demonic Resurrection in the Primordial TowerBook&Literature · droopyauthor - KamikazeDrew12dCommented
Definitely a 16 year old
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Why use a quill and parchment for the explanation instead of system messages or just straight up beam it into his head? Seems kind of weird to make it physical message like that in such troublesome way .
Chaos welcomes you, Kai Stormborn. Help Mr. Beedle to spread his tales throughout the Magical World of Harry Potter.]detailMultiverse Systems: Demonic Resurrection in the Primordial TowerBook&Literature · droopyauthor - KamikazeDrew12dCommented
schizo
'The answer lies here,' a deep voice told Kai in his mind, 'not in the madness; this is my essence.' Kai found what he was looking for, not too late. 'I am a loner, yes, but without the people surrounding me, I am not truly alone,' he told himself. 'The butterfly's wing can't cause a storm if there is no wind to support it. These people, they are my wind,' Kai was sure of it, surer than ever.detailMultiverse Systems: Demonic Resurrection in the Primordial TowerBook&Literature · droopyauthor - KamikazeDrew12dReplied to Potatowned
An edgy momma's boy
'Yes, mother,' Kai thought and closed his eyes. Scenes after scenes raced by his mind, like a blurry photo reel. Most of it was blood and pain. The rest was claimed by unending screams, and hidden in the gaps were events of Kai trying to deceive others, using them, manipulating them.detailMultiverse Systems: Demonic Resurrection in the Primordial TowerBook&Literature · droopyauthor - KamikazeDrew12dCommented
The art comparison is getting to be a bit excessive at this point.
The two beams died away as the white walls absorbed the filth. Soon the room with no doors was empty again. Four more beams came out of nowhere and made contact with each other. Two red and two blue; as if the creator of art had decided to resist heaven's will using sheer numbers.detailMultiverse Systems: Demonic Resurrection in the Primordial TowerBook&Literature · droopyauthor - KamikazeDrew14dCommented
Too cheap to spend 80,000 points on her?
Maybe I can do something about her strings of death to make her immortal or something. A thought for the future. - KamikazeDrew14dCommented
Every time I see the name Clarice I think of The Silence of the Lambs
[You can actually, as your power increases, in the future,] says Clarice. - KamikazeDrew14dReplied to Sol_Pendragon
It is very jarring to suddenly change the style of writing in the middle of the conversation. And it's considered to be something that bad writers do when they can't differentiate when separate people are talking in a conversation. I'm on chapter 45, so can you tell me if it's something you're going to continue doing? It's a deal-breaker for me when reading a story.
Kouske: "So, Sakuya-san, any secret ingredients you add to make it special?" - KamikazeDrew14dPosted
I've really enjoyed my time reading this so far, and it doesn't make you feel like you've wasted your time reading it. There are a few little inconsistencies here and there, and when the author suddenly switches to script-style writing for no reason, it can be really jarring. But other than that, I have no real complaints.
- KamikazeDrew14dCommented
The script style writing really isn't necessary
Kouske: "So, Sakuya-san, any secret ingredients you add to make it special?"