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Comments of chapter undefined of The Journey of a Psionic Champion(Rewrite/Continuation in June 2024)

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Vatsal_06
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You are making him more emotional than needed.not even Naruto is this good. It's like you are forcing him to be good. Yes it make his character more depth but its not fun to read same emotional baggage. While giving him more emotional depth you are making him 2D who is not even slightly selfish. I am not telling you to change previous chapter but in future chapter you should make him be Little more selfish he is human.

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FlowingRocks
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poor Gyarados but thanks for the chapter

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Lucky_Rob
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MC be like:

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King_Joshua_Curato
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Daaam now Mcs like human pokemon huh. I dont want this to get dark but honestly I really want a sneaky mc to outsmart and steal stuff from team galaxy hahaha hes got the wits he just need to be lowkey haha

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AvengerV
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the unic problem that i have until here is that you make him read a lot of books and other things but for me mc is just a normal guy.

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Azathoth2
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Thanks for the chapter đŸ„°

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Carnic_321
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great story but a few Questions will the MC ever train to use his Fairy typing? can humans Evolve? if they have a typing they should be able to with enough training especially in their specific type/typing

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drake2378
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man this chapter added some extra depth for the mc. he will probably feel guilt for what he did for a good while. and dreepy fearing him maybe flinching or such in some interactions will make the mc feel regret going the fear angel. cause after all he was told to earn respect but instead of earning it the hard way of proving he deserves it he went with the short cut of respect through fear

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Kacper_Cwajda
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Thanks for the chapter

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World_Atlas
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thanks for the chapter

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reader12143546
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Great chapter author sama.

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Diegoa
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Thanks for the Chapter!👍👍👍👍👍

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kn1ght
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Thanks for the chapter