The story is great. The drama is there. Tragedy is there. It keeps you wanting to read and at the same time you dont. Not because its badly written, its just that it feels like the protagonist is barely hanging on and seem irredeemable with boiling wrath but no means. No money, no knowledge, it feels like torture. To top it off, theres a suspected transmigrator. Would you look at that? Why not the MC right? And the ralts even has problems or possibly talents unearthed but at present could only be a liability. Authors seems like to make this as a tragedy focused fic, and the few reads were good but heavy to read.

When next updates?

No updates :(

Such a scam

If you cant even finish your fanfic, why do you expect us to believe you can finish your originals? In fanfic, the elements are already there. All you have to do is do the story plot and characters. Originals are much harder because you start from the basics. You cant even arrive to at least 70-100 chapters of this and now youre using this to advertise your originals whod probably flunk just because you dont feel like it anymore. Stop wasting time

This story is ass. The plot itself is ass. Mc gets stronger the more wives and children he has? Thats trash. Thats trouble in the making. I dont know what kind of grass the author smoked to have an idea like this.

This is so stupid. The kids only 2 and the first thing you do when you see a kid with powers like that is not to treat them like an adult. Maybe be more excited and treat him as a genius. Aura gives off intent. The girls not psychic. Why are you making it so that the girl finds it so fishy. Thats a 2 yr old kid.

Ehh youre just forcing situations to MC everytime he gets out of the tower. Convos are also dry and feels like talking to a robot.

Thanks for the chap. Mc's reflection there about his mistakes was good too. Ughh yeah I hope you dont go trying to be a hero all of a sudden mc.

Author I hope this isnt some last ditch effort just to get stones or something like what you did with your other novel the lazy new life. You promised to revamp that one and 3 months later, still nothing. Gonna be disappointing tho this was a real good fanfic.

Eh the little rock types a bad pick considering war when its heavy. Zubat for a crobat wouldve been better. Good for scouting, detection and assassination.

Poor ekans :< not fond of ekans for a starter but this pokedeath here is dark and depressing.

Woah Jack's fortunate Senkos more on the mild side. If it were a dragon or dark type pokemon with those memories of abuse or being neglected, He wouldnt have it easy. At least now he knew the possibilities before its too late.

Are you dumb or something? It wouldnt mean anything anyway. Its not like rockets are city local gangsters that Herbert could do a thing anyway. Whatd he do? Act cautiously than instead of helping, will make him a more primary target? Idk even how dark this fanfic is at this point, so isnt it all fine?

Author feels insufferably smug imagining himself the MC then banging the harem.

Yesss its back.

Thats pretty convenient for an excuse. And it would probably be the reason too. It wasnt explained much how his fairy typing affected him so its still great hypothesis. Yeah and im just maybe lil low and disappointed, i expected much from mc because he knows more and capable. Knows the future too. I thought hed be flipping the table here.

Havent read the manga but wouldnt it be ironic and crazy if Silver joined the g force or maybe international police or crime fighting organization or something.

Ah right, the guy who was mature for his age and could probably be judged to be more than a prodigy compared to his peers did something. I could say it was a mistake one after another. From infiltration to overestimating himself to that mistake he couldnt even find out. Right. He didnt even do a single thing against galactic in those 15 years. No precautions much. Not even tipping others bout them. Its not like you could fault him tho. But doing something reckless like that not even months after going on a journey, seems pretty outside of his personality to me. Ive always hated the hero trope, but if you wanted to do something why not do it sooner when youve got the advantage of intelligence? Anywayss great chap

Yeah just surprised where I thought it was going. He had cool starters after all and now he looks like picking just any pokemon that comes near him hahah