Comments of chapter undefined of Re:Zero/Mordred Pendragon. King of Lugnica (Re:Zero/Fate fanfiction)

as long as you dont summon some lovecraftian monsters like the Arthur prototype fic, everything will be fine, it was a major turn off on that fic, i mean, dude has a bunch of beasts and foreigner servants from fate to make into the bad guys, and he had to get lovecraftian stuff and make his story even more complicated, the last plot he had before going into hiatus was about searching for class cards or "wild" servants or demi-servants, he just needed to have a foreigner merge with the whale, not THAT, aaaah, well, anyway, your chapter was good.

Great chapter

Thanks for chap! idk if its just me but some of the dialogue felt a bit odd this chap.. Like very 'gogogogo' n a bit rigid at certain parts. Ps: Meek Paranoid Rem is so adorable. Ps2: Puck is to cute.

Rem is so adorable, he looks like a squirrel. I wonder if you will do an Emi POV? About what she thinks of Mordred or something.

I do hope Subaru starts to mature slowly throughout this fic. Him making a fool of himself was funny and accurate for a no-RTB version of the character but it would be nice if he got a slow character development of his own. Otherwise why bring him into this story at all I suppose. (Pun intended)

That doesnt sound right who are we gonna arrest

More chapter

Great chapter

So is Subaru getting Ram? She’d keep him grounded in reality. Maybe make Subaru sign a marriage agreement with Petra without knowing what it is and then make her bring it up in the epilogue of the story when he’s married to Ram and Petra’s legal. I just found the idea funny as Ram would make fun of Subaru for everything he’s ever done in life. Maybe you could summon Subaru’s parents using Beatrice to give him some closure as it’s unlikely he will take the trials now he doesn’t have return by death. (Everything said here is literally just my first thoughts after the chapter pay it no mind if it annoys you) Nice chapter!

btw, besides having a dragon core, mordred is also supposed to have some of the primeval energy from britain that he inherited from morgan, its the closest thing to a witch factor, will you be exploring that?

Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.

Ty

Thanks for the chapter author san...😁😁😁

thanks for the chapter 👌

Good Work

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